Summer vacation with my family. (assignment 2)
It was a day I will never forget when my Uncle got married this summer in Germany. All my family members gathered together and it was really funny. One of the best summer holidays I've had. He was my last uncle to get married in my family. He was planning it for a really long time. Approximately 2-3 years. There we're a lot of his friends there.
A few days before the wedding were chilling in my other uncle's house and they had a really nice backyard and there was a tree and we hanged and climbed on three often because it was really fun but dangerous at the same time. I had a lot of my cousins their ages from 4 to 21 so we really got along with each other. We played water balloon fighting so basically, we just throw them at each other and we got wet.
At some point, my little cousin the 4 years old one hide one of my other cousin's phone who is 14 years old. He hid under a piece of a pile of mud so in the end when we found her phone she had to dig down the pile of mud with hands. She got the found back it was all dirty but she cleaned it up and it worked well in the end. We just reminded her to not leave your phone to a place where our 4 years old cousin could reach it. Later on Leo ( 4 years old) our cousin ran after a ball which I kicked away just for fun and meanwhile he was running to it he got stumbled over a piece of rock and hurt his thumb in a weird way. Blood didn't come out of the thumb but it seems he got hurt so we put a bandage on it so it could heal faster. I mean he is a kid who likes to move around a lot and do crazy stuff, for example, jump to stares and go back and forth on the stares. Which is interesting from a 4-year-old kid. I really got along with him many times, I showed some funny youtube videos and football videos which he really liked and sometimes he came to me and told me to show him some more videos but my uncle (his dad) didn't like his son to watch too many videos because it is not good for his eyes.
Before the wedding parties, we all of us family members went to a big church and the church had a really big nice entrance and door. I mean it was really cool and I liked it. The entrance was done because of the official wedding thing were they are husband and wife. After that, we all went outside and they served some drinks for us. Adults got served wine and the kids got some orange/apple juice.
After that when we all went to our Uncle's house to celebrate it we got some nearby neighbors to visit us but when they ringed the door we didn't hear anything because of the music. It was way too loud but luckily I noticed them through the window which was a really good thing. After all the drinks we drank and foods we ate me and my three other cousins went outside for a walk and chill. It was nice to walk and chat about our future and past what has happened. By the road when we walked we saw a sign that we wanted to touch by jumping and reaching to it but only my cousins who are 20 and 21 years old got a touch on it, I and my 19 years old cousins couldn't reach even how hard we tried.
On our way back home to our Uncle's house, at their, backyard we played some football with my other cousins and I taught my youngest cousin Leo the 4-year-old one to how to kick a ball correctly. In the end, he learned it and he was really happy about it and so was I.
Later on, we all went back to our home countries. I came back to Finland and after two weeks, school started for me and here we are. Like I said it was one of my best summers I had.
A few days before the wedding were chilling in my other uncle's house and they had a really nice backyard and there was a tree and we hanged and climbed on three often because it was really fun but dangerous at the same time. I had a lot of my cousins their ages from 4 to 21 so we really got along with each other. We played water balloon fighting so basically, we just throw them at each other and we got wet.
At some point, my little cousin the 4 years old one hide one of my other cousin's phone who is 14 years old. He hid under a piece of a pile of mud so in the end when we found her phone she had to dig down the pile of mud with hands. She got the found back it was all dirty but she cleaned it up and it worked well in the end. We just reminded her to not leave your phone to a place where our 4 years old cousin could reach it. Later on Leo ( 4 years old) our cousin ran after a ball which I kicked away just for fun and meanwhile he was running to it he got stumbled over a piece of rock and hurt his thumb in a weird way. Blood didn't come out of the thumb but it seems he got hurt so we put a bandage on it so it could heal faster. I mean he is a kid who likes to move around a lot and do crazy stuff, for example, jump to stares and go back and forth on the stares. Which is interesting from a 4-year-old kid. I really got along with him many times, I showed some funny youtube videos and football videos which he really liked and sometimes he came to me and told me to show him some more videos but my uncle (his dad) didn't like his son to watch too many videos because it is not good for his eyes.
Before the wedding parties, we all of us family members went to a big church and the church had a really big nice entrance and door. I mean it was really cool and I liked it. The entrance was done because of the official wedding thing were they are husband and wife. After that, we all went outside and they served some drinks for us. Adults got served wine and the kids got some orange/apple juice.
After that when we all went to our Uncle's house to celebrate it we got some nearby neighbors to visit us but when they ringed the door we didn't hear anything because of the music. It was way too loud but luckily I noticed them through the window which was a really good thing. After all the drinks we drank and foods we ate me and my three other cousins went outside for a walk and chill. It was nice to walk and chat about our future and past what has happened. By the road when we walked we saw a sign that we wanted to touch by jumping and reaching to it but only my cousins who are 20 and 21 years old got a touch on it, I and my 19 years old cousins couldn't reach even how hard we tried.
On our way back home to our Uncle's house, at their, backyard we played some football with my other cousins and I taught my youngest cousin Leo the 4-year-old one to how to kick a ball correctly. In the end, he learned it and he was really happy about it and so was I.
Later on, we all went back to our home countries. I came back to Finland and after two weeks, school started for me and here we are. Like I said it was one of my best summers I had.
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VastaaPoistaYour writing was fine. I only found some minor issues in your text like u forgot some commas or something but everyone makes mistakes so it doesn't matter. I found all the things written in the text that were thrown on the dice so that was well done. Like when you're cousin was hanging from the tree then u mentioned about the buried phone and your cousin's thumb and how he liked jumping on the stairs and stuff and when your uncle got married u mentioned about the big entrance in your uncle's wedding. Your story was actually kind of funny to read I don't know why. Maybe I thought it was funny how many cousins and uncles you had. Well written text!